Thursday, November 9, 2017

There is a monster in the toilet.
Sam borrows his sisters phone.
The monster comes out and snatches the phone off him.
He flushes himself own the toilet.
He chases the monster down the sewers and Ends up at the monster's cave.
He Shows the monster something funny.
Then he gets his phone back.    

Goal- choose and retell my own story.  Write a story with a clear beginning,middle and end .                                                                Put capital letters and full stops in the right places.

In Sam's toilet there is a monster, not any monster, a sewerage monster. One day Sam borrowed his sister's phone she had a cool fart app that could make the most funniest sounds. He was laughing so loud he did not hear the sewerage monster come out of the toilet. Then the monster grabbed the phone and flushed himself down the toilet . Then the only way to get the phone back was to flush himself down the loo too. Then he followed the monster to his cave. He creeped up behind the monster and then the monster started to make the fart noise on the app. When the monster was laughing at the app Sam creeped up behind the monster and grabbed his phone..

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