The invention.

Goal- Retell a story in my own words.

-Use my capital letters and full stops in the right places.


Hemi had to mow the lawns every weekend he did not like mowing the lawns but he did not have a choice. He said there must be another way of mowing the lawns.
So Hemi decided to make a great machine. So he got some string , a laser, a blender, a nose trimmer, a steak knife and a computer. Then he made a great machine, it took him all night.

 In the morning Hemi took his machine outside .Then Hemi’[s robot actually worked, Hemi could not believe his eyes when his robot was mowing the lawns.  He was so relieved so he chill-axed on a chair, then he fell asleep then he was woken up by some grumpy people. Oh no where did Hemis machine go?

 Then he went into town and saw big buildings on the ground. He saw all the cats and dogs chasing his machine. Hemi got chased by all the people in town. When he got his robot the robot went up in the air, then Hemi tried to yank his invention down but it did not work. Then he started to rise up in the air and then he went past the clouds and as soon as you know it they were up in space. Hemi got his machine and switched it of. Then they were flying down from space like a rocket and they landed right on the trampoline and Hemi quickly put his invention away so his dad didn’t know.
Runaway Robot Rampage – "What happens next?" animated video from Ministry of Education on Vimeo.